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Castlevania - Carrie Fernandez by Vicsor-S3 Castlevania - Carrie Fernandez by Vicsor-S3
The (potential) portrait of Carrie Fernandez to be used in the High Resolution texture pack for Castlevania 64 ([link])

I don't entirely like how it turned out so any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.
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KaeporaGaebora3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Idk why... but I think her face might be a little too round? This is my opinion though, so it probably looks fine to most.
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zeratanus Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   Digital Artist
three times... Three times i have typed out sometime and three times I have lost it.

OKAY SAFARI AND DEVIANTART, THIS TIME ITS GOING THROUGH

sorry, but lunch break's running out so you get the short version ^^;

Made a quick edit with the liquify tool to kinda show what I mean
Link to the Edit!

The chin shape might be a bit wonky now, but you can draw a straight line through the nose, mouth, and chin. They are all lined up.

The neck I changed to be a bit less curved in, cuz I think the jugular would, at that angle, keep it pretty straight. Totally didnt use a reference though so that could be a totally wrong assuption

The shoulder I crummily moved up too to show where I think that should be

Hope it helps! (and that I can actually press the Add Comment button this time without losing the whole damned thing AGAIN! :faint:)
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Vicsor-S3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I tried to alter it for the better (again, dA must hate me by now for reuploading the same image 5 times :lol: ).

Thanks for the help. :worship:
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zeratanus Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   Digital Artist
Lookin good :D glad I could help
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zeratanus Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   Digital Artist
Looks decent, but the main issue is her chin - it should be on the same central line that the mouth and nose follow, but it's off to the side. That and I think the shoulder on the right slopes down much too far.
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Vicsor-S3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Better now?
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chutonon Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
the ear looks weird
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Vicsor-S3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lowered it a bit, made it darker and covered the top part with hair. Better?
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chutonon Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
you are asking me? well, yeah!
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Vicsor-S3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, thanks for the help. :worship:
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chutonon Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
no problem
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